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Grizzly bears may be huge and scary but really, with a bit of training and  a lot of love grizzly bears could be your very own special pet. It will be like the t.v coming to life! No more burglaries, no more feeling scared,  No more freezing cold nights. It’s a 3 in one deal the grizzly bear is the answer!

Have you ever been scared ab out being robbed? Well no need to fear anymore because the grizzly bear will save you! You will never have to be scared or worried again. The grizzly bear is at the top of the food chain so they can protect themselves, Also Grizzly bears have better sense of smell than a hound dog so they will know if something isn’t right!  If you had a house burglary, what pet would you rather have, a simple cute white bunny or a big Grizzly bear, at your door?

A grizzly bear is a great companion buddy. They are fluffy and cuddly just like a teddy bear. You will always have someone to talk if you are down, they live for 28 years so they will be there for a while. They hibernate during the winter so you will be able to spend time with family and friends in the cold seasons.

Do you think a grizzly bear is hard to feed? Think again! Do you have lot’s of wasted food? Well, you wouldn’t have to waste food if you had a grizzly bear. You wouldn’t have to pay lot’s of money for pet food because you would just feed them leftovers.  Also the grizzly bear's diet consists mostly of berries, nuts and insects so you wouldn’t have to buy meat for them. Plus, they eat insects so your house will always be insect and pest free!

No more burglaries, no more feeling scared,  No more freezing cold nights, no more wasting leftovers. I guarantee you it will be an amazing idea. You want a grizzly bear? Well stop what you are doing and buy a grizzly bear now!

By Chloe, Hannah, Sofia. V. and Molly